really liked this piece man
imagery was really good...u turned a played topic into something different and a unique portrayal of your story
some sandout lines as well....
flow was solid thruout...all complimented each other well
and sme of the sentences were worded perfectly

'Skies rain flames Sendin' devilish epics toward the brain
I used to cry out for help No one answered I stopped callin'
dope..

really well constructed piece...the ender was class as well
props