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Old 10-06-03, 09:25 PM   #9
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But hey Im not complainin' Well then again yes I am
See the stress in my hand? Don't push me to get over it Im tryin' the best I can

^^^ Shit Was Tight, Personal . . .
The Whole Piece Flowed Nice . . .
Your Rhyme Scheme Followed
Through Evenly, From Bar To Bar . . .
Nice Imagery, And You Even Had
Some Alliteration Here And There,
If It Was Intended Or Not, It Was
Nice ! !
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