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This was a good read... i thought you werent good at topicals??? lol you are gettin pretty damn good.. ok here we go
Born a faceless baby... another face in the crowd...
Thought I was special thats why I cried out loud...
^^^DOPE... i like the imagry of the faceless baby... good meta
Infancy intilled the fact.. life's snowflake we all matter...
Meaning is what we strive for... its the goal we are after...
^^^VERY good line... i like that idea of the goal we are all after
School starts and tells us to strive for individuality...
But yet tells us to conform... I cant stand this duality...
^^^this is the best line i think... its pure truth... this is how EVERY school is... i dont care what kind it is
Taught to follow rules.. yet we must think outside the box...
Formulas to adhere to yet preaching original thoughts...
^^^this will be my excuse when i get in trouble for breaking a rule next time lol
School prepares us for real life... Is this how things must be...
A society that tells us what to do... how to think and what to be?...
^^^like the matrix... lol i like this line too... very deep
I guess ignorance is bliss... I hope to be blind to reality...
Freedom a fantasy... Being able to speak ya mind... a fallacy...
^^^freedom a fantasy... good line... fuckin gov't
You must work to support yourself... Another role to play....
Wondering when I'll choose my own path... could it be today?...
^^^sounds like my mom... she says somethin like that to me like every day
Retirement comes anticipated... shutter to think I truly hate it...
So stuck in a rut... that I now miss this game and how I've played it...
^^^dope
Deaths around the corner... not afraid I"m truly stunned...
Realization that REAL life... only exists "on the horizon"
^^^good ending... it was a good topical that you ended well
this was a good topic and you adressed it very well... you should be placed pretty damn high in SS cause they are doing the rankings by verse... not wins and losses... good peice... GREAT read
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