This was DOPE... this is one of the best reads for me in a while... your flow reminds me of Aesop Rock... the imagry is almost there too... there were some fuckin DOPE lines in there too

This lair is deep Fell in it a while ago And never stopped fallin'
I used to cry out for help No one answered I stopped callin'
^^^My favorite line

keep up the dopeness... you gotta represent the name
us "Mental's" have to keep it ill here on rb... you are livin up to your name... peep soem of my shit... tell me if i am too