As technicality goes, Taktik probably got the better in this one. Though flow was not an element that jumped out at me, in either verse, Tak's was a more even piece. However, it was a story I never found particularly compelling. For me, it was a "work" read. A very dramatic, sensitive implementation of the topic, but could also be called "tacked-on". The last 8 is by far the best part.

Fgee's verse actually entertained me. It begins with a background and moves into an emotionally involving story, to come full circle in a comical conclusion. It's very showing of Fgee's style. Technically, the writing isn't at an elite level, but there is a good deal of honest emotion integrated in it. It's what potential hinges on. This verse would be better with healthy dashes of wordplay, but as it is, it represents itself well. The topic is an integral part of the piece, which is flipped up, in an albeit textcee move, in a pretty fantastic way. It's nice to get to laugh.

Vote - Fgee