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yo this shit was pretty ill, the vocab was wasnt all that and the wordplay was alittle weak, the structure and the rythum, the topic was sweet and on task.the delievery was nice. defintely somthing i can relate too.
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We all want the big picture, it seems, to include it all...
How the fuck can that fit on a photo, life ain't that small.
Cuz the grass is always greener on the other fuckin side...
Everyone one of us is Jekyll with his own personal Hyde.
Being selfish or self improving, it's a fine line ta walk...
Cuz in order ta fly high ya gotta leave behind the flock.
Do I stick with my present, and just wonder, "what if"?
Or do I take my future, gamble it, and walk off the cliff.
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damn dude.. each one of these lines were straight eye-openers for me.. i hope to see more from ya, keep it real, and keep droppn. one.
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