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Old 10-07-03, 12:00 PM   #11
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I didn't know they banged like this in Amsterdam...

Shit.

This was a very nice piece, my man.

I like the shit that comes from the heart and I most like the shit that comes from only one.

It's why I find colabs hard to read, no offense to ya other shit...

So I did a search and found one that was just you, and to be honest, I'm glad I did cuz this one piece you dropped months ago is better in my eyes than all ya colabs recently...

I felt ya shit here. I guess I just like the writer-reader relationship better than the "performance" feeling I get from colabs.

This piece was deep.

I loved the line, "crappy piece of ground that don't belong to you"...

Very tight and very fuckin true.

We need more shit like this cuz to be honest, all that other shit, the "I'm bad", the "I'll smoke you", the "forced to bang" shit people be dropping left and right up here...

Sucks...

The delivery might be good, the talent might be there...

But the message sucks.

Who the fuck needs ta carry nines and what the fuck for?

The result you get, most of the time, is misery like the lady in the verse is going through.

You ain't bad.

You ain't hard.

You're a piece of shit that could one day fire that gat the wrong direction and take out a child.

That's reality.

That's what this piece was...

I prop it much.

Peace
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