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Old 10-07-03, 12:42 PM   #9
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Just as a point, DOES ANYONE STILL FOLLOW BAR LIMITS???????

Cam.... Vurse overall was DOpe, good flow, concept, seemed very natural, probably the best I've seen you
do thus far,
Mind Embarked Between, Yet Another Life full of Love and Spite,
Minds Agnostic sent to Defrag Logic Embodied in Anothers Plight
Covered Light spectacles, Fading memory, Saving energy Linked
I stand Nursing Wounds for the Cursed and Doomed's Last Wish.
Practice makes Perfect, the Hate In Me Blatantly States the Truth
So i Save the Wisdom Tooth for Glistened Truth, a Sailors Salute.///
Really tuned in the picture here, kept the flow and topic strong, overall good structure

Bribe, a somewhat decent vurse, but you did two bars over the minimum, and it didnt seem like you really
tried very hard...
flavor her vanilla cream, to quench the evil screams in hells creek.
Failed to speak but this week I caught a wiff as she streaked.
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