Alright, This battle, well was not what I expected from either person.....
Evolve, the short bar one sylable rhymes didnt really work for you here, the overall point was obvious,
and somewhat profound, but I've seen much better.
::So Often It Seems.. The Pitch Is Type Wild
Dont Walk From The Plate, Take It & Smile
Wait Till Its In Your Zone.. It Might Take You A While
& While You Wait On Your Own
Dont Keep Fate In Denial
Cause When Its Shown.. It Has The Face Of A Child//
^^^^^That was pretty ok,
Under AKA Mavin AKA Einstien
Same problem. this battle wasnt very strong....
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etty theft, overshadowed by bad grammar
Majolnir inspires, so fly high the banner
pluck strings lovingly w/the Sacred hammer
out span her, and let the notes fly free////
Overall I would have to say Evolve was more complete, Vote Evo
::Now go vote fair on my ish, FAIR seriously::