Carson's Verse

Better 'Face' it...your avi? only way your spittin 'Nice'-Call'in u a Vet? Cya'more like 'Weighted' dice-/1
(cheap and overweighted)......lolz

First line's played, fact that it's a personal gave it a somewhat redeeming factor. 2nd was okay.

Notice 3 losses came infronta hundred posts'shows ta boast'-this kids been poppin 'Cock' like 'Home Improvement' hosts-/2
(Cock.....glue)

Was okay...kind of a stretch on the whole cock/caulk thing

Forget'**Gassin'up**'I re-labell this child wit my cruise controll-Give'em an extra 'Hand' an he still throws outta Fold-/3

Okay

Cop? Where?...oh wait,never mind thats jus the polls...'5.0'....Carsonjet yo.... take anotha one home-Cyanide couldnt merk on-line'wittan "Ebay" loan-/4

You stretched the shit outta that first line to hit the rhyme scheme, 2nd punch was decent.

Change ya tone...Lyrically u couldnt be fresh if u "Reynolds Wrapped"-This kat's been lapped....Mad...he lost can't find an ass ta Tapp-/5

1st punch was weak, 2nd was eh

Overall a decent verse. You had a lot of shit that's been seen. Just reworded....couple original ideas....just not very hard hitting.

Lyrical's Verse

Wot do you interpret wen ya hear the word Carsonjet…jus an illiterate chump from Boston
But with 43 losses how can this bitch be a Vet…he couldn’t even compete, he jus lost’Em.

Shitty first line opener....good 2nd punch

This loser be low fares, but I jus paid him in tha Fullest…jus a herb for Junior Productions,( avatar )
He don’t even contain flare, he gotta be tha Dullest…Takin his record away like Reductions.

1st line wasn't too good, 2nd was uber shitty

So fuck the fucking Red Sox…they be tha best from ya area yet they still be no doubt Wak,
I’ll be poundin miles on ya Clock…coz you’ve now been merked by the weakest of Attacks.

Okay...if you related the Red Sox to him....that mighta been good. The way it stands...crap. You're sayin your shit is weak with the second line? You coulda said you weren't trying...but callin your own shit weak...bleh.

April 2003? Yet ya record so many defeats…and still getting merked in each of ya Aliases,
You couldn’t step to me if ya had 1000 Feet…you old n tired horse, ya been killed at tha Races.

1st line was okay, 2nd was gay.

So jus answer me this Question…your 19 years old and you still aint learned to stop Dik Ridin,( prof’ )
But ya still don’t listen to tha Lesson…after this loss, the productions reject you to Confide-In

Where? Who was he dick ridin? give us some prof'....or it's just a pointless punch. Do they confide in him now? Carson...are you the Productions Psychiatrist? aka weak punch

Not beefin, but that verse sucked Lyrical. I haven't peeped any of your other shit. Maybe you just had an off day. That shit was horrible. I'm just hopin you weren't feelin it this battle.......especially with a 9-3 record.

Carson took this in every category...no doubt about it.

Vote ~ Carson

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