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Old 10-07-03, 05:25 PM   #5
Menik
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Yeah..work on the rhyme scheme a little...it flowed pretty well...your vocab was pretty good...your multies were pretty decent i thought...you didnt really get off topic at all...just work on the rhyme scheme..but keep at it..and keep dropping.

and if you could return some feedback..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84048
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