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Old 10-07-03, 05:50 PM   #2
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the fa=irst stanza i was like wtf is she on? but then i read its homeless and i was like ut oh
this is gonna be good
filed is gonna drag me in and what did you do ......you did it


god damnit
stop guessing
quit concealing
let out whats inside,
it eats me
it kills me
cant push it outside,

GODDAMMIT this was great i always have had this thing about cussin in poetry and i dont thinkit should be in it unles you can feel teh emotion and the placement is right IT WAS RIGHT here damn that was great

sins lighten
i so wish that was true every time i ttry to repent i end up causing more trouble/sin

i loved this piece from header to footer gurl
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