Febble Minded's piece was original to me. The technical elements weren't outstanding, but it didn't muck it up either.
The "flow" of KOT's was... just not there for me. Really bad, it showed you never "got into" the topic at all. You had some good lines that could stand in a more integrated verse, but this was... obviously unpolished. And, yeah, the finisher obviously destroyed you. Whereas FM's finisher was nice.

Vote-Feeble Minded