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Old 10-07-03, 07:31 PM   #14
MeNTiLL
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Shrap

People say my career is over...but here is a little clue
if indeed my career is over it would only be over you. . .
This line was aight...

i dont have to try in this battle, im suprised your still around
this battle's like arms cut off cuz i got the win... hands down !
Played seen it a lot of times

A.I. is your only accomplishment?! damn..... this kid's a slacker
heh, watch as i give HaZe a Big L..... like the mainstream rapper !
Blah...Ugly ass wordplay

your verses are BlAh...i told u u're garbage no need to ignore me
y? bother 2 talk about how wack u r, when ur verses.. do it 4 me !
Ehh...Not good

you're outta my league!..i'm better than you..& your also outta
luck
imma hang this cat from a flag pole so that every one knows what's up !
Didn't like it...Should of had a harder finisher

Overall - A lot of played and filler lines...

Sonn

Shrap is known to lick Scrabble Boards in attempts to spit ill wordplay
This kid spits like a bitch..With all that dick in the way!
Didn't like it...Weak

Givin head in the back of class is the only way your goin down in 'history'
Fear of getting 'kicked'..This Kat's left with more goosebumps than RL Stine mysteries!
I thought this was nice...Coulda been worded better tho...Still aight

Like Kurt Warner, Ima "Ram" ya chest and wear your heart on my sleeve
Shrapnel still in the league? Like opey without ho-hos its hard to believe
Blah...This was on the low side...

Yeah Shrap spits ill... That explains how weekly you get worse...
About to son you worse...than if I let Camarac ghostwrite my verse
I like the second line...Not the 1st

Brand the mark of a loser in your forehead,so Shrap can really burn-an-L
Its Killer Instincts,How bout you bitches learn how to spell!
This was aight...

Verbally abuse this bitch... Its rape how I"ll cover all the bases
My punches leave Shraps face more fucked up than typing with alternating cases
Blah...Didn't think this hit hard...

OverAll
I think Sonn aka Tim E. came with a better verse cuz i didn't really see that many played lines and his punches hit harder than Shraps...It seemed like Shrap didn't wanna win...

Vote = Tim E.
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