Prophitt~
You definately are not slipping! I am, however..It took me way to long to reply to this, sorry I didnt see it sooner...But you slipping, no..You are getting better, if possible..

"my little princess of incest i must decline respectfully
understand i regret my lack of desire especially sexually
i fail to recognize why you seem to be obssessing see
when we both know my situation both abroad and domestically"

I havent seen such impeccable flow in a loooong time...Especially in this forum..Lots of people will argue that poetry doesn't even need to rhyme, but I personally, love it when a piece can be filled with multi's and bounce, yet still harbor that same power in its message...Just like these first 4 lines..Amazingly well worded..Really drew me into the piece.

"yet you press against me even as i draw back in revulsion
my horror is apparent but you play unaware of my emotion
as if afflicted by some evil spell of unforseen devotion
LOOK i said NO! hard to believe we shared a former relationship
when right now you are eating away at my infinite patience bitch"

And you keep up the perfect rhythem...Only the imagery is growing increasingly more intense...This kind of reminded me of that movie "Lolita", though it's not quite like it...(If you havent seen it..don't..its very disturbing..'princess of incest' suits it very well)

"your not so subtle and sly sentences resemble a simple stitch
a thorn in my side causing pain at every turn tumble and pitch
my philanthropic duties are undeniably permitted
to fail to recognize your standing of faith tightly fitted"

Once again, incredibly well worded...just flawless.

"the time for question and pity is over no more warm shoulder
no more moving mountains turning stones to boulders
my heart has grown much colder while your lust has grown bolder
this battle may be the last i'll be fit to soldier"

wow...very powerful bit right there...

"i left you in a pool of tears bright and glistening in sunlights play
i hope i showed you the path to walk gave you the words to say
and gone is the love for you the desire is now at bay
freedom sings rejoices rings and let the tears fall where they may"

PERFECT ending...I absolutley loved the last line..kind of saying "i dont give a fuck", only in much nicer wording..

Anyway, this piece as a whole was incredibly captivating...Youre writing style is what I really love..I could pick your piece out of 30 anonymous ones..simply by the way the words rolled off my tongue when I read it....You are one of the few in this forum who is a garunteed good read every time.
You're madd talented..Quickly becoming one of my favorite poets on here....Lookin forward to part 3....
Pz n propz.