Nite - You have good structure. Your flow is okay. You're punches are very weak though. You could work on your flow a little bit and you definitely need to work on your punches. Even keepin your flow the way it is, if you just up the power behind your punches, you could rack up a lot of wins.

Calda - Very nice verse man. I'd almost be tempted to ask you what your alias is. If you are a new member, it's nice to have another decent person on the site. They're always welcome. You had some nice punches with good wordplay and a pretty good flow to it. Very nice verse.

Up your level and elevate Nite....Calda, just keep workin on gettin better. After you get a few more wins under your belt...request permission to enter into the LLL. You keep those type of verses up and you could probably make it in. Good battle...

Vote ~ Calda

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