Thread: 8 Omens
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Old 10-07-03, 08:41 PM   #5
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Sorta jus tellin peeps what ur about in this spit,i feel it had the usual wordplay and good vocab as usual,word choice was there and as some have said that the structure was off - it wasn't,with the use of the multies it allows it to flow to a beat even though in text it may look slightly off,in some parts it may have been slightly but didn't look to be,so as a whole liked the peice but in any peice theres little flaws like incorporatin more relevant vocab,but hey no-one on here can do everything perfect.Good shit dawg.

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