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Old 10-07-03, 08:49 PM   #1
kbuzz
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i need feedback

IP:

You must hate my guts if you dislike conceit//
I don't hate on wack shit, i give it precise critiques//
Every coin got 2-sides, don't judge me by one of mines//
A General, but I get muddy wit' my troops on the front line//
Battlin' setbacks and diminishing faith//
Summon whatever strentgh I can to finish this race//
Now in days nobody likes who the f@ck they are//
F@ck the next man, just be who the f@ck you are//
Put the gear in reverse just to pass you twice//
Only thing a hoe could give me is braggin' rights//
I'm the truth, hook me to a polygrapgh and test me//
What i got to prove? i paid my dues, i'm debt-free//

let me get some feedback...
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