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Auspicious- You are really dope...this is the first piece of yours I've read. Your take on the topic wasn't really original, but it was portrayed really nicely. I need to learn how to tell stories in rhyme again, because it looks so phucking dope (READ: Your storytelling was great). For future reference, you don't smoke lines, you snort em
. Your flow was alright, and the emotion was plainly there. The internal multi steez is always dope to see
M&Ms- dude, even though you didn't try, I thought this was great. Once again, not a very original take on the topic, but it made a really nice comparison between the life we lead the lives of the much less fortunate. It made me think. The 5:05 line was really nice, highlighted your whole take on it. The flow was pretty good, but you didn't have very much wordplay. Pretty good dude.
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