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Old 10-07-03, 10:29 PM   #4
Da NFamous
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i thought the piece started off on the brink of mediocrity and i wa a little irritated to see another rapper try poetry and not be able to fulfill the varying levels of depth but this piece surprised me becasue u came thru with some strong rhymes in the second half and some good messages that need to be heard, though the "honey" line was corney the ending was very good and i liked it overall, 1luv.
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