fgee- whoa dude, that was disturbing. And by disturbing I mean funny. Like poke-porn. I wasn't really feeling your flip on the topic. It was funny and all, and you actually managed to capture the little kids pain, but it seemed like too much of a joke to actually grade, you dig? Your wordplay was well done, the line about mommy's death was nice. Fuck am I morbid =)

taktik- wow man, you had a beauty of a verse here. Your bars were phucking ruler straight. Thats crazy! Sand style flow. Unflawed. Your wordplay was really nice, and really abstract, it reminded me of Sage francis. You have none of your own style, it seems = (. I really enjoyed it though, and the incorporation of the topic at the end was nice.

vote-taktik

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