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KOT went belly up on this.
King- Your verse had some okay wordplay, and an okay scheme , but you went for the most obvious concept with the topic. Theres really not much to comment on, because I know you're better than this. I laughed my ass off at the last line, I'll give you a better topic next week.
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Feeble- Yours was great. I thought it was hilarious. Good god, my sense of humour is morbid and this satisfied it completely. I loved the Bearing arms line, I quoted you to like 10 people on AIM. great work man, you owned this.
vote-Feeble Minded
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