K check it.....lol

White:Nice Setup...Flow Was ok...Good Story Telling..The Fam concept was held well...Over the Sands OF Time..I felt Ur verse..Good Job..Nice Flow...u Kept It Short...and Vocab Wasnt Crazy..but u had good Meaning...Good Job...6/10

2hot:first thing...i didnt like the / at the end of each line/ but it doest matter to me its whats in front of the /...ur flow lacked..in spaces that stuck out...vocab was nothing..i didnt see anything that striking...store fell of a lil....just cuz the topics sand..doesnt mean u write about sand..lol na kid its ok...keep elevating...ull get better

my vote:White

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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center>

<center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center>