& Just When You Think You Know Whats In Store
It Sells Out Of The Product You Were Searchin For
Is It Worth It Or.. Will You Get Caught Napping
Called Out On Strikes, Acting Like It Didnt Happen
Ship's Going Down & Your The Strapped In Captain
A Black Hole Of Bad Actions Pulling You Back In
But That's When... You Raise Your Chin & Be Strong
Keep Trying On Your Violin & Get In Tune w/ The Song
Assume Your Wrong, Change The Actions & Words You Sing
Then Take That Bat.. & Bash The Foundation Of Strings

^ thats when u picked it up.... main part of ur verse i liked


Under...Flow was a lil Aghh At first..but u picked up at the end well...good vocab...n nice story telling...all around well rounded verse..and a good drop...and the ending the last line..a killer...i liked it alot....

my vote UNDER...mainly cuz evolve ended nice..but i didnt feal the start...if u kept it all like the ending u would have takin it...but nice drop also...this was close

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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center>

<center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center>