Wowy. I thoroughly enjoyed the effort put into the piece to ensure adjacently-flowing parts. . Surprisingly enough, the unique structure led to a unique, yet affective flow - rather than the traditional crappy structure/crappy flow. I've read enough of each of your pieces to decipher between your writing(s), but I honestly couldn't do so in this particular collaboration (at least not without reading the beginning, ). As for quotables, no one line was more powerful than the next; which, in this case, provided a formula for success.

You could've done more with it, could've went further. . But it was worth the read, & I'll look foward to phuture collaborations.

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