aight...1st off...given this is text you dont have to make it look good
i.e. stay away from hypens, quotes, // etc.

the flow was good... stayed easy to read
the vocab was well used... keep it up
the topic was kinda hard to get but u stayed on it..somehow
the closer was good...nice way to wrap it up
upping for u
keep it up...and thanx for feedback
next time just drop link at end of you post as such
www.rapbattles.com