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Old 10-08-03, 08:49 AM   #13
Taktik
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Vote Joey

Nice verse...........solid punches, a couple personals, nice flow..........WAY better structure...........

Young...........shorten your lines......10-12 words a line...........

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u called me out but im going first thats very lame
kid you is the herb that was smoked by mary jane

^That was nice
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