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Old 10-08-03, 11:57 AM   #20
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ight... X's verse

i could be like you, spit some wack shit, but i couldnt wit help/
but then you'd just eat my shit...n be all full of youself/

Not a bad punch i liked it... a tad played but not bad 6/10

With me laughin in the grass strapped with macks, packed to go/
this is the one and only way, I'll ever be clappin at your show!/

^ Nice meta there i was feelin it 7/10

I'll kill you, bury your body in Memphis, so your future's Bleak/
Don't speak, you're like Monday through sunday, your shit is week/

Both were pretty good so i'ma give u 7/10

The battle soars, with lyrical venom im leavin' you on the floor sore/
cause this bitch is on his last day of his period with no flow/

This flowed horrible wit no metas 4/10

this is a murder the way i leave u with a few days-to-live/
they call me a judge the way I put death into sen-ten-ces/

Not bad Not great 5/10

29/50

Com's Verse

I burn your mommas pussy coz I boast balls of flame
And like a white picket fence... your posts are all the same

First line was played stay away from sex and momma punches but second was ill 6/10

Your gun has no effect… that’s why people fear me
I’m like a bag of salt; your slugs won’t come near me

Not bad... solid punch... 6/10

You’re dreary; your rhymes have no meat like salads
I’ll Hack your left leg off coz I’m changing the balance

Good wordplay decent punch 7/10

You get KO’ed so much it plays on your conscience
Ya battles get slept on… coz you’re always unconscious

This one is ight nothin special 5/10

The RB sponsors’s the only time you could rhyme sense
I’ll smash yo watch on your head so your embarrassments timeless

For a finisher it could have been better but it was still dope 6/10

30-50

After reviewing my hypothesis it shows that COM edged him by a tad bit... very close battle

PROPS to X that was major illness by both u... it wasn't no weak battle it was tight

Vote- COM
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