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Old 10-08-03, 04:46 PM   #5
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wow this was a good piece!! the only thing that i found hard was the format it was in a kept getting lost, but once read twice it just blew me away. perhaps i dont understand the LOVE part of it that you said is hard to explain but even the way i see it its a good piece. and its a piece that makes you happy and glow, thats not seen to much here.

Distraught thro dementicia...I'll mend this broken angels wings...sturdy his shaky hands while mother nature threatens and father time sings~

^ that there stuck out to me it was those lines that are stuck in my head now because i find them so beautiful and unique. i think this was well drawn out and expressed feelings so powerful. good job yet again

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