HIYA DIVERSE ( i really appreciate you replying to my poems)

first off your structure was based more like an open mic or a battle
poems tend to all flow together and seperation of bars is usally used for specific reasons but do what ya feel

your my inspiration, you keep me from disintigratin,instigatin my situation, i see now its cause u loved me and wanted to see what i was facin//
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loved that your lobngest and most vivid ...when in love its so true ( often) that you want to feel what the other person is feeling and you want to be in that mess wit em
you did a very nice job here diverse