I Know your aim was to keep it smooth and all laid back but i still reckon it lacks emotion..there is chilled back with emotion still...it just sounded TOOO much like you were just slurring it out..you have to make people believe you're goin hard but still make it sound chilled...So yeah just keep gettin at the style and all will be good mate..you've got good potential in that voice so build in and just learn the best way to manipulate it...g'luck...Pz...

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