ok, first off, don't start a poem witout a rhyme scheme then put a rhyme scheme in tha end, doesn't work well that way, as a poem, tha only feelin i got was a sort of, "i've created a machine, i'm gonna beat everyone, nobody can stop me, cause i got tha best car out there", which is like a self-glorification poem, and i'm personnally not a fan of those types, also, i was not noticin any feelins comin out of this poem, it was basic to an extreme, no similes/metaphors/deep and inner thoughts to tha topic, but rather this is how it is, simple and plain, and, once again, not a fan of this type of poetry, jus keep droppin though, mayb u'll finally drop one i actually like...

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