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Old 10-08-03, 10:32 PM   #10
Accelerate
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Hmm It was Dope...But half Of the Replies Were Ass Kissing.

It Was A Different Subject, No Doubt about it, which Is why I Could Say That I Wasn't Feelin it, like Some Of Your Other Pieces. Some Lines in The Piece were Pure Genius, Others Seemed To Be Filler.

Life or Phases? Brain Starts Crashing Down.
Writing Pages, But Literarly Passing Nouns.
Open The Dictionary, All Rhetorical Questions.
The Pills Do Nothing, Can't Feel The Essence.

I Was Feeling Those Lines The Most.
Otherwise, This Was A Dope Piece, But It Had A Different Aura About it, which Made It A Little More Difficult To Enjoy. Also, The Flow Seemed Too Quick, but Other Than That, It Flowed On A Poetic Vibe, And I Wasn't Really Expecting Something Like That. Good Shit Though.
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