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Old 10-08-03, 10:45 PM   #7
Pugilist
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good flow and vocab. This was a pretty good piece. My fav lines:

'Power, Will, Strength - All Come From Tha Led With-In
Be-gin To See Shit - Some Say Tha Pencil Will Sin'

'Stay Calm . . . Tha Gov Can’t Take Away Wut We Choose-Ta-Speak
All Unique In Our Views, Write Wut U Feel, Fukk A Critique!'

and from there on to the end i thought was the strongest part of the verse...nice lil drop.
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