this was defintely hot, good wordplay, and vocab expressed. It was defintely abstract in it's own way yet understadable in more places then others. You had a good sense of imagey too involved in it which is always good for writing. My favorite line was
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Opportunity to squander trust, we're all either ignorant or oblivious
imaging the facts within my tracks- instrumentals for idiots
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that was dope right there, good wrd usage throughout this piece well put. Peace