ok, flow wasnt bad, vocab decent, wordplay and punches where pretty good...multies could use a lil work..overall not that bad...keep dropping...
im raw nigga i dont give a fuck piss me off and i will rip out yo liver/
im like "karl" cause im the "mailman" when it comes to rappin i always "deliver"/
liked that shit the most ^
if you get a chance peep my latest open mic and leave me some feedback...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83967