i am ready for anything, from the death's game
to the angel's jokes

I found that amusing^
i never really thoght of angesl playing jokes before is your thought that they are playing them upon themselves or upon the people they are guarding or to society in general?
id really like to kno your insight

on teh rest of the poem yes your right it wa random thoughts and teh rack was jumpy
id suggest PICKING ONE of those thoughts and elabotating on it for your next peice

hazy