Ahhhhhhh, russian roulette if im right. Nice topic, pretty original, well written, flow could use a little work, syllable wise it was out a little but nothing major, vocab was straight, a little short to really grasp or get into, imagery was decent, writers voice could use a touch up but again, nothing too shabby, good transistion, held my attention, id of liked to see it lengthed out and more indepth but from whats there it was bad.
Not bad at all.
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