Yo, Cam...
I appreciate the feedback ya gave on my "Game" verse...
Thank you.
So...
Are ya trying ta say this is a true story?
Cuz if it is, that's pretty fucked, man.
How old are you? For Cancer ta kick in, and for you to smoke 5 packs a day???
You'd have to be as old as me or even older...
What gives? Was this fiction or non?
Anyway...
The drop was great, Cam.
Very deep, very expressive with your metas.
Nice wordplay that brought tight imagery, but, like I said...
Made me picture an old guy like myself.
So it kinda threw me.
But this is really good, my man...
Really good and sad, depressing as shit to have ta face the realization, basically, that ya fucked yourself and your dream.
Do me a favor, my man...
I dug up the first thing I ever wrote here...
Please tell me what you think.
Thanks...
My first piece here...