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Old 10-09-03, 08:04 PM   #8
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my opinion


anyways

the wing clipped was my visual because i recently saw a picture of a lil gurl angel with tattered wings and i used her as teh character in this peice

you wrote well
short breif stanzas

i loved the theme and i belive the title did throw people offf being theres so many poems written on teh circle of life

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