opener:tie
closer:necrid
structure:necrid
flow:cut
punches:necrid
overall:necrid
hotlines
necrid:
this battle is a tragic scene, SHOOTIN THE ALPHABET to say u BLASTED G'S/
ur family's SLAUGHTERED MEAT, NO FATHER??, well i'll cook this BASTARD'S BEEF//
~second line isnt as gud as first~
cut:
just a wack has-been, i meant newbee-so sue-me-i'll bring ya level down like richie-valenz/
nec's in danger, once my skillz anger-cut peel's-bangas/
please peep this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84191