nice drop, flow was good, vocab was pretty good, content good, multies good...was feeling what ya was saying...nice drop...had good emotion...keep dropping

sometimez I feel as if I'm shit outta luck like cancer patients...
I can't get a girl...how I look as a 19 year old nigga usin' a buspass as transportation...

stood out to me ^

I got myself a job...with a girl that's goin' be fuckin' my friend...
every time I try to do somethin' good I end up gettin' fucked in the end...

^...really summed up your whole drop, nice way to end it...

yo if you get a chance, check out my latest open mic, i could use some more feedback...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83967