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Old 10-10-03, 12:24 PM   #5
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.|Lyrical, ur verse was well put together|.
.|punches from start to finish|.
.|flow was up there|.
.|n ur wordplay held rounded it off|.
.|it was a good verse|.
.|but ur downfall was tha u kinda lacked a lil in the creativity dept|.
.|but outside of that, ur shit was tight|.

.|carsonjet, ya shit was deathly creative|.
.|came out w/ punches from the bell|.
.|flow was up and personals hit|.
.|all together good verse|.
.|definitly was up to usual standards|.

.|this was a very hard battle to vote on|.
.|both emcees came out very nice|.
.|but in the end|.
.|carsonjet took this w/ the notch on the creativity factor|.

.|vote-carsonjet|.

.|drop a vote here|.
.|http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=84443|.
.|appreciate it|.
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