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10-10-03, 01:47 PM
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FaLLeN
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all and all nice verse, ur vocab wasnt too bad, perhaps u need to work on the complexity of ur metaphors, but all and all touchen rhyme, could tell it was from the heart.... keep commin with ur shit dawg.
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