i liked the piece it was very unconventional, content was good
but i think the flow of the piece kinda changed when you gave
specific events, because in the begining it was just speaking of
the bad things in life in general. Keep writing.



The lord gave us free will, because he loved us so much he didnt
want us to be like the angels, they can not make choices. He gave
us a gift that is greater than anything ever before. You are only
focusing on the bad side of it. With free will you can make the
choice to do good or bad. Since it is so easy to do bad so many
do that instead of trying to be good they do not realize all the
benefits of doing good things when they need something.
All of that Bin Ladin stuff has meaning also.
Those people are fighting for their own country and religion.
The same as ourselves it is a fight to preserve themselves. We all do the same, not meaning that it the thing to
do but in all reality we all do the same just not at that extreme.
We can not truly appreciate what we have been given until we
experience the down side as well. I would like to read a poem to
parallel this one, if you would write one.

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