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Old 10-10-03, 02:29 PM   #5
Menik
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Yeah i agree...this was a real good piece....it flowed very nice through out it as i read it...Vocab from both were real good i thought...structure was real good as well...metas were good...and i like the way you both ended your verses...good piece...and keep dropping.
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