aight...struc 1st.... you should try and get your 2nd verse to be the meat of the piece... hook was good...nice way to space it

1st verse
the approach was good but the rhyming words were simple...hit the dictionary...vocab needs upping

2nd
flow wasnt on... and 2 small (previously commented on)
sides that good verse

3rd
closer killed it...great way to end it

overall good drop, i know it was heart felt and that she means alot to you