the last part seems more poetish than a spit tho

overall a good drop to me, nice vocab, flow was okay, concept was okay

.
Doctoring false Prescriptions, my Voice Listens to Tongue in Cheek
Road ahead is Long and Bleek, paved w. pebbled wrong we Speak.
^^^^ nice multis and flow that was good

the rest of it was nice, consistent, but this is what i was talking about the last part'


Kissed by the suns caressing lips, & swiftly I drift toward,
Warmth, Held as Syllables Swarm into my Physical Form.
Miracles torn from my embodiment in Sodomy’s Ancestor,
Mind’s Hollow Refined Sectors, Following Time protectors. .


^^^ sounds poemish, y'kno........doesnt sound like a spit

sounds like u writing a poem right thur