I dont think it was siick the rest

to me it was okay, flow was very very simple

vocab was okay, the only thing that made me even read it was the concept

you need to come up wit a better flow and lay off the simple rhyme schemes i see u doing

"Hoping that Either id be respected, & shown True Peers Love,
or become noticed, & then fulfill what id Always Dreamed Of."

very simple

the only line i really liked was the one about cancer stiks

basically it

7/10

work on a better rhyme scheme and flow, its too basic, just had a good concept
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