damn, that is dope. i realised you were talking about war when you said:
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The Name Now, A Shiver Through The Spine Of Time
Never Witnessing So Much Death, Such Cold Blooded Genocide
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that line was dope, and flows pretty nicely.
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But Now Adolf Hitler Lays In A Bunker, Surrounded By Angry Men
Each One Armed With Guns, Wishing It Could Be Them
To Be The One Who Puts This Bitter Life To Its Final End
Bittersweet Is Defeat, A Dose Of His Own Medicine
Slowly He Draws Himslef Full, Kill His Wife And Kids
Kills The Guards With Him...There Shall Be No Witnesses
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this was really - straight to the point - like real hard hitting. it seemed you really wanted to get your point across. last line of that was really sick, wud sound nice in audio, with a break in the beat and then the bass comes back and 'there shall be no witnesses' in a sample.
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Swinging The Axe Of Racism, A Disease Plagueing Clean Land
Causing The World To Turn On it Axis, Begin To Turn On Friends
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keep dropping bruv